Friday, July 29, 2011

Slumber thoughts...

She planned the night
with a blissful thought,
gazing into the mirror
reviewed the lesson taught.


It was midnight's call
that arranged the meeting,
to become one with one
and to grace the night's greeting.


Whilst the darkness thickened
with the black night sky,
She pondered over her life
to give it one last try.


Laying down on her bed, 
waiting for slumber to take her in,
She batted her eyes
and finally met the one within.


It was that time when
she had discovered her lost self,
with trickling due in her eyes
she had reached the last shelf.


It was the one that contained in it
all the sadness that she had once bought,
realizing her true worth
she had now the beauty and bliss that she once sought.


She was happiness engulfed
with a quench for more,
her questions all answered
as now she was sure





that it was time now

after her bitter strife,
that no one but her
held the strings to her life.

6 comments:

  1. pleasant read :)
    write more...

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  2. Well versed and well articulated....
    Keep 'em coming....
    :)

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  3. Suchi : Thanks a lot baby... i'm so glad you liked it.. :)
    Rahul : thank you so much.. :)

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  4. Deep. Nice. Bhai and Bhabi love it. keep at it gal. u r gifted. :) love.

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  5. One other thing... change the color of the text. its too dark against a darker bg. both should not be dark or vice versa. choose a good contrast.

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  6. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease change the colour of the font! make it white or yellow, I know u won't change the background :D n make the font a little more bold, it'll be clearer then.
    Abt the poem - It's deep, somewhat reminds me of me :) Keep up the stuff :D I really like it :)

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